Date: 2006-05-07 08:33 am (UTC)
The perspective is kind of funny... for the time, claim that he's on a ferry and that should solve that problem. Oh, and that the person taking the photo was kneeling... since you are very obviously looking UP at him. Wait... *looks at shirt again* oooooookay. I'm just not going to try and deal with the perspective issues.

The pants... are they leather? are they normal trousers? what is up with them... there is good control with cel-style shading on the rest of Watari. Then I get to the pants... *eyetwitch* and the glove... *double-eyetwitch*.

The hair... wonderful. Excelent use of highlights. It looks very soft and silky. I am fangirling the hair.

Also love the fact that you kept the glasses ON his face and functional (something that I normally don't do... even though I wear glasses and know how annoying it is to not be able to see properly).

Still trying to figure out the trench coat... I'm guessing that he uses too much starch on it.

Over all, it's a nice fanart. Keep up the good work.
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